Tim looked at the door and it was
a tiny door and was cut into the trunk of the tree and Tim began to tug the little
door open and just as it began to move, he
heard a squeak up in the tree and he looked
up and there sat a tiny man.
“Get off my door,” the little man squeaked and
Tim felt upset and he hadn’t meant to
do any harm.
a tiny door and was cut into the trunk of the tree and Tim began to tug the little
door open and just as it began to move, he
heard a squeak up in the tree and he looked
up and there sat a tiny man.
“Get off my door,” the little man squeaked and
Tim felt upset and he hadn’t meant to
do any harm.
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