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Jake and his mother sam went camping.Sam was reading a book , whilst Jake was going to the beach.

Half an hour later Jake came back and his mother started screaming because Jake's foot was bleeding as he had cut it on a rusty can down the beach.A man was passing by and heard sam screamed.He went to check what happend and he told Jake that his cut is deep and he needs a doctor.Sam gave him some bandages.The man asked if there was a doctor in that village but Jake said there wasn't and they had to go to hospital.Sam took Jake to the hospital.The doctor said that needs five or six stiches and it will hurt.

Jake felt dissappointed because they had to go back home and couldn't enjoy camping.