What would you be able to...
Descriptive writing
see?
hear?
taste?
smell?
feel?
Imagine you were here...
Now use your ideas to help you write a paragraph to describe the picture.
colours, bright lights, rides,
people, stalls, toys, sunset
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people shouting
and laughing,
music, rides
hot dogs
candy floss
sweets,
icecream
pop corn
fizzy water
hot dogs
roasting,
sweet candy
floss, pop
corn,
perfume
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people walking past, hot/cold,
It was getting dark at the funfair. You can see lots of bright and twinkling lights switching on around you. People around you are going around trying different rides and playing games. Some also win prizes. When its time for a break people eat hot dogs, burgers, and have candy floss and ice cream for dessert. Music can be heard all around you. You can also hear the rides zooming past and people shouting with excitement. Going to the funfair is lots of fun for all the family.