My wonderful adventure to space

It was the day I go to space. I jumped out of bed excitedly with joy! I couldn't wait till I got to the rocket.When I got there my heart was pumping full of blood. I got inside the countdown started ...5...4...3...2...1 Blast off! The rocket zoomed to space quickly.When I got to space, the planets looked cool. I went to mars to eat a bar of mars but there was no food. I rushed back to the rocket looking for for food. ...What was that i could feel... the rocket broke Oh no!