My Creation Rap

In RE we have been learning about creations of the world. We created our own raps from the christian creation story. This is mine:

Before Earth the world was a mystery,

Then God came along and made history.

He made the Earth, night and day,

Before too long it was nature's say.

Afterwards the animals came to play,

But sadly they are killed day by day.

Then we came along,

And ruined this song