'Where is he ? ' questioned Hope,'he should be here, we need to leave in ten minutes.' Hope and Thalia waited for what seemed like tedious hours until finally Thorn arrived . They hopped onto the cranky,ancient boat that once belonged to Thalia's grandfather [who had once been a traveller ].

Hope immediatly decided she was captain and orderd Thorn, who she made the cabin boy , to pretend to scrub the deck. At the front of the rickety boat Thalia was staring out at the modern,memrable and mezmorizing London skyline whilst clutching onto her grandpa's gadget he had given to her on his death bed.

Sunset came and the three kids went to bed in the basement of the boat. However, that night was to be one only some would remember!

Thorn was the first to wake up by the mild storm. Soon after the girls awoke to se the strangest thing. Thorn standing at the edge of the shaky boat like a dead person staring at the blood red sky lingering above them!

'What is that ? ' shouted Thalia

' And what's up with Thorn ? ' said Hope looking very startled. Suddenly there was a ginormas bang and all of the kids tumbled backwards. Crystal clear lightning bolts came crashing down and a bright green on hit Thorn!

Some of the biggest skyscrapers came falling down and smashed into a thousand glass shards, people were falling down from the London eye's pods. It felt like the world was going to end. Hope struggled to swim through the threatning waves and grab thorn. She dragged him down the stairs to where they slept and called for Thalia ,

" Thalia come now ! " . She arrived just in time and said to Hope hopelessly

" What should i do ? or could i do ? " Neither of them had any idea on what to do until suddenly Thalia rememberd the gadget. It was a electrical dagger that took some ones heart out without hurting them and healed it . She took it out and stabbed Thorn, pulled out his heart. It was as black as a raven's feather. Whilst pressing the knife agaist his heart she and Hope both screemed with fear. Just then his heart turned pink again, she placed it back in his body and just then his eyes opend wide and he stood up as if nothing had happend.

But as he came to life Hope's body started to crumble into tiny pieces and she enterd the after life because when the knife saves on it killes another .

By Georgie Condie , yr 6

THE ELECTRIC KNIFE