Kyran

The year 4 children thought that our podcast was good because we mentioned Fortnite a lot and Fortnte is the top rated game and its the best game in the world and that is a fact.

They also liked it when we was talking about saving endangered animals because who don't want to save animals like a little puppy for example.

They also said we could improve bye speaking louder and we cold play more songs like the Fortnite rap battle witch is a song about Fortnite battle royal.

They said to improve on our speech and they said it mite improve on our reading because we was stopping to say our speech a little because we didn't know what it said because our hand writing was to messy.

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What did we do ? We had to research and we had to practice what we was going to say.We had to say our speech over and over again.

How did we do it ? We done it by practising our

speech and getting to recording it then we had to edit it on garage band so we could have a jingle and a jingle is a tune witch is normally at the beginning of the podcast.

If we did a follow up,what could we do differently ? We could of made it different we could get rid of the crackling in the background.