The kidnapper
One dark rainy night there was a boy called Tommy and he had a brother called Jake. They were just having their dinner which was fried egg and rice, Tommy just sat down at the table to start eating his food and after ten minutes he had finished. So he got up and went to bed.

Everybody was asleep. Suddenly a smash happened, an intruderg climbed in through the window crept up the stairs like a mouse. When he got up the stairs the man tried to kidnap Tommy but when the man entered the bedroom, Tommy was awake so he saw the bad guy.

He called his mum to help, then the man went running down the stairs. Once he got down stairs, he climbed back out the window and disappeared into the night.