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The Snowy Day
One morning it was snowing heavily. i woke up and couldn't wait to got o school so i could play in the snow with my freends! I ran along the icy, slippery roads until I saw my freend Claire. She was wearing a tee shirt and shorts! i thort that was very starnge. As I went over to say hello to her, I saw my other freend Alex. He was wearing just a tee shirt two! Wow, something was very weird! Alex and Claire were laughing at me because i was wearing my thick coat, my scarf and hat and gloves.
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