Hello 4 Blue,
I am trying to write a story but I am stuck! Zoe has given me some helpful feedback. She explained, "Lucy, your story could be even better if you changed some of the boring verbs for more interesting choices and a fronted adverbial would really make it special" but unfortunatey I cannot think of any.
Could you help me? I need to:
- find and change the boring verbs
- add in a fronted adverbial
Type your improved sentence as the reply.
Thank you so much!
Lucy
My sentence
The zombie walked into the disco and burst into life. He danced and sung until midnight!