L.O. I can use emotive language in an empathetic piece of writing.

Today is a beautiful day. The most fantastic day. The best day of my life. I can not believe that in just a few hours I am going home. My heart is full of love and hope for the first time in years. I am over-joyed, I am filled with energy, I could dance the whole day. Finally the war is over I will be at peace forever.

When I got off of the train and saw my mother I was ecstatic and flung my arms around her. Tears of joy ran down her face and mine, she hugged me with such care. I also got a kiss on the cheek from her, showing love. Best day ever.

By Nicholas