The dangerous plane

It was the day I was going to America. I was really excited, but it took a very long time to get there. As I stood on the plane I felt something wrong. Me and my dad found a empty space.I sat on the seat it was so uncomfortable it felt like I was sitting on bricks. Then, when I looked out of the window I saw the wing damaged. I it showed my dad and he told everyone on the plane. So he told the pilot to land the plane immediately. Gladly everyone was safe from the hazard.