Death in a cave

One day a man called James came climbing a ancient mountain called Shingsw. As he was climbing his mate and him fell at the same time as they tried to grip the rocks but both of them smashed onto the floor as they slowly forced there self up. They hobbled on into the darkness a huge shudder shook the cave! A huge rock slide came plummeting down as the two men ran for there lives they heard an evil laugh shook the cave, the men were petrified as they toppled over. There faces where as pale as snow...

As James woke he realized that sadly and horrifically his mate was crushed! As James slowly limped on, disheartened to be alive he was knocked out... the next day he was sacrificed to the gods and died!

By Matty .S