The old terrifing bridge

As I approched the old wodden bridge my spine tingled. My heart was beating so fast with fear. I felt like I was about to be eaten and teard up by a sea monster. I kept on thinking that a voice was calling my name to come and join it. I kept on edgeing closer and my heart was pounding. I steped on it and it mad a loud creak which felt like I was going to fall into a deep water and I would drown over the vast waves. I should not of looked down because it made my legs shiver with fear. I steped on the bridge, then took a step back. I was freezing cold as the wind wizzed past me, I looked around and saw snow surrounding me. The snow was a white as pages of a book, and as cold as Iceicals on my nose. it was tempting to walk on the bridge, so I started to walk on the bridge it sounded creaky and I did'nt know were it would lead to.