She goes home from school

She suddenly notices a gang of boys chasing her

She does parkour to get away from

them/roofs/walls/fences/edges/ledges(show not tell emotions)

She goes in her house like nothing happened

As I finished school and heading towards home as I was was jumping and skipping like I was in a sugar rush . Halfway there towards homeland I spotted a gang of uneducated boys wearing black hats stealing bikes and others goodies. I started shivering and sweat coming down my face and a nerve racking moment. I said to myself ‘OK calm down everything is going to be just fine ‘,whispered Becky .

Suddenly the boys spotted me with their shiny black bike and their grey hoodies staring deep into my soul. after that moment they started chasing me (intense music plays) as i ran like the wind.

Just over 2 minutes they are still chasing me but I wasn’t expecting them to be slower than me they were as slow as a duck and I was as fast as a rhino and I climbed over the blue fence and long jumped across the slanted hill to the brick hard wall using all my power and effort to get past those challenging obstacles I said to myself‘ I will never give up till the end ‘ roared Becky. I wasn’t expecting all of the incredible thing back there and now she lost them and now running back to her house and up the stairs making a thudding noise (thud thud thud)and opened the door with her shiny gold keys that she borrowed from her dad and went in like nothing happened and having a smug smile on her face.