The sweet shop

I went to the shop, me, my mom and dad as they turned the corner I saw a giant sweet shop the windows had all kinds of new sweets displayed in them. I called for my mom to come to come back, take me the sweet shop. I went in, I saw lots of candy, it was like paradise of sweets, gummy and chocolate. I asked the lady if I could buy candy, she said " Take it free!" Then I found a shiny candy. I eat it and I was transported to a magic world of candy and sweets.