Bubbles to space and beyond

Plan

My character is called John Wilson-Swain

He has brown hair and green eyes.

Opening

John Wilson-Swain was walking on the beautiful beach with his hands in the pocket of his grey jacket. The weather was warm with a breeze and the sand was burning with the heat. There were sand, pebbles and rock pools everywhere. He found a telephone and some bubbles along with a bubble blower in one of the rock pools.

Middle

John picked up the telephone and bubble blower. He answered the phone and it was the US government calling from Area 51. The US government told him to blow the bubbles and he was immediately hypnotised and went to the space ship doing as the telephone said.

The space ship went up into space and they landed on another planet where there was an alien ship. John got knocked out by an alien figure who came out with a dangerous laser sword. The alien figure was brown and scaly. He had sharp teeth and big, spikey, sharp hands with an evil, burning, life threatening laser sword. He had a smile on his face when he was swinging the laser sword. John blew a bubble and defeated the alien.

John immediately escaped and went to the ship. Meanwhile the captain of the ship got knocked out by an alien. The alien took over the ship. John figured out that there was an "on" button on the bubble blower and sent a laser to defeat the alien. He locked the alien in a locker and launched the ship into the sun.

To be continued....