These sentences are ‘sick’ and need help to get better. Can you help?

The ball came towards Harry. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited. It was up to him.

POBBLE 365

17/06/2020

The rocketing ball thundered towards Harry.

He jumped high into the cold, endless air.

He held out his massive, hopeful hands.

He was excited to shoot the ball and score to listen to the atmosphere. It all went down to him, Harry, the best in the team.